How to write a screenplay
How to write a screenplay: the
secret to elevating it above the ordinary.
You may have read a few posts on how to write a screenplay that
go something like this:
• Immerse yourself
in film script writing theory.
• Write visually.
• Keep lots of
white space on the page.
• Write, write,
write, every day.
• Understand that
writing is rewriting.
And this is often where the advice ends. This isn’t to say
these points aren’t true. They are. And we’ll spend a little time in the first
section of this post on how to write a movie script going into a bit more
detail on a few of them.
However, many aspiring writers stop here
at the basics, and fail to do the most important thing of all when
writing a movie script:
Push their
imagination.
The screenwriters who truly learn how to write a script are the
ones who push their imagination in all areas of the
screenplay as far as it will go. And that’s what we’re going to
focus on in this post.
Here’s what’s coming up:
• First steps to
writing a movie script: the prep work
• Writing a movie
script by pushing your imagination
• How to write a
screenplay by stretching the concept and story
• How to write a
movie script by creating surprising and contradictory characters
• How to write a
script by making scenes original and unpredictable
But let’s start by looking at some of the basics involved in
learning how to write a movie script.
First steps to writing a movie
script: the prep work.
Here’s a short (non-exhaustive) list of some of the first steps
to writing a script you should take.
6 steps to laying the foundation.
1. The first step is to commit to screenwriting. You’re not going to get very far if you
don’t take it seriously and are prepared to put in the work. This post lays
out how to become a screenwriter by committing to the craft.
2. Writing a good script means reading great screenplays. Download and read as many as possible. Our
list of 50 of the best
screenplays to read is a great starting point.
3. Read the best screenwriting books out there in order to
acquaint yourself with as many film script writing theories as possible.
4. Make a list of twenty movies you wish you’d written and rewatch them. Make notes on why
you love certain scenes, pieces of dialogue, characters, etc. as you go.
Immerse yourself in the classics of cinema by watching movies on some “best
movies of all time” lists.
5. Writing a script outline of a movie as you watch it and then breaking it
down, is an essential part of learning how to write a movie script. If you want
to learn how to do it, grab a copy of our free Structure Hack pdf.
6. If you haven’t already, purchase some professional
screenwriting software and master the basics of how
to format a script.
Check out more essential film script
writing resources, which includes these posts on how to get a screenwriting agent and how
to write for TV.
This above is kind of a How to Write a Script 101,
that will set you on the right road. Even if you’re a complete beginner.
So now let’s start with an overview of what we mean exactly
by “pushing your imagination” when it comes to learning
how to write a movie script.
Writing a movie script by
pushing your imagination.
Apart from the steps to writing a script listed above there are,
of course, a number of other obvious reasons some writers learn how to write a
screenplay for a movie over others.
These include:
• Hard work
• Dedication
• Strategy
• Connections
• Personality
• Luck
However, in this post, we’re going to focus on writing a movie
script by focusing on the one skill you need to develop above all others…
Pushing your imagination as far as it can
go.
Many aspiring screenwriters study
screenwriting theory to death and write every day, and yet still produce
scripts that feel underdeveloped and “second-hand.”
That is, they produce material we’ve seen before. Or it’s
original but yet to be pushed as far as it could go. Instead, everything
remains in a “safe area” in which the writer
feels comfortable.
Writing a spec script is easy. Anyone can do it after
reading a few books and purchasing some script writing software. But the
writers who really learn how to write a screenplay—one that
will help them break into the industry—are those who learn how to unleash their imagination. They’re the ones who give
us something different.
Let’s now take a look at how to do this by learning to never be
satisfied with concepts, stories, characters or scenes that feel flat and
predictable.
How to write a screenplay:
concept and story.
A particularly common fault of spec scripts is that the core concept—the overall idea behind the story as laid out
in the logline—isn’t big enough.
Many writers have good
movie ideas, but fail to really dig into their imagination to really
turn them into truly great, original and imaginative ones.
There have been a lot of films, for example, involving vampires
living among humans. There have been countless films about young lovers not
being approved by their parents, or about ex-hitmen coming out of retirement
for one last job.
So if you’re going to write about these subjects, your
concept must bring something original to the table while doing
so.
If the concept remains unoriginal and
predictable, chances are the story will turn out unoriginal and predictable
also.
How to write a script concept and story like a
novice (example).
Let’s say you want to write a movie involving a familiar set-up:
a family struggling to survive in a post-apocalyptic world that’s populated by
monsters.
The script
logline might go something like this:
In a post-apocalyptic world, a family finds
itself locked in an epic battle against a horde of man-eating monsters.
Fair enough. But this isn’t a pitch that’s going to get an
exec’s teeth chattering with excitement.
How to write a script concept and story like a
pro (example).
Now let’s take a look at how a recent movie approached the same
overall idea:
In a post-apocalyptic world, a family is
forced to live in silence while hiding from monsters with ultra-sensitive
hearing.
This is the logline to the film, A Quiet Place, and all the writers did is put a twist on the
concept by giving the man-eating monsters ultra-sensitive hearing.
This leads to the idea of a family being forced to live in
silence as the only way to survive and, voilà, you have a much more original
concept.
The post-apocalyptic world isn’t original. A family that’s
threatened by a horde of monsters isn’t original. But now the concept has a hook because the
protagonists are being forced to survive in a way we haven’t seen before: by
not speaking.
(Granted, The
Silence used this exact
same concept and almost made the same film. But its unoriginality is part of
the reason why it only scored 28 percent on RottenTomatoes.com.)
How to write a screenplay by pushing your
imagination with its concept and story.
Take a good hard look at your overall concept and story. Does
the logline really describe a situation or set of
characters we haven’t seen before on screen? If you were watching this story on
screen, would you be surprised at the direction it takes?
If not, they both probably need more brainstorming.
Here are some solid steps you
can take to learn how to write a script so your concept and story are as
original as possible.
5 Ways to shake up a concept/story.
1. Think about the kind of movie you’d want to go see. What would surprise you? What kind of twist
on a familiar concept would you enjoy seeing? What kind of twists in the
narratives would make you sit up and take notice?
2. Take your initial idea for a movie and brainstorm as many ideas as you can on how to switch
it up and make it more original. Writing a logline that’s short and sweet can be hard but can be made easier
if you remember it should encapsulate the conflict set up in Act 1 of the
script.
3. Read pro screenwriters’ treatments and story outlines
to learn how to condense an idea down into prose form before you start writing
the screenplay. Follow the link for a selection of screenplay
treatment examples.
4. Writing a screenplay outline is a recommended next step before you start on the actual script.
Once you’ve written one, do a ton of brainstorming for the actual story too. If
your characters aren’t shocked by events as they unfold, chances are the reader
won’t be either.
5. Get feedback on both your logline and treatment. Pitch them to friends, family and strangers.
Refine until there are no more plot holes, and people respond with “Whoa. Then
what happens?” Or words to that effect.
We can’t stress enough how important to nail your initial core concept and story and make them
as compelling as they can be before you start writing.
We have a Logline
Analysis and Synopsis/Treatment
Coverage service in which one of our pro writers can give you
feedback on your logline and/or treatment.
How to write a screenplay:
characters.
When you think of your favorite movies, you’re probably often
thinking about the characters in them, rather than the concepts behind
them.
For example, much of what many people love about Raiders of the Lost Ark is the character of Indiana Jones. If he
was an unsympathetic or boring character, we wouldn’t care as much if he gets
his hands on the ark before the Nazis or not.
Many aspiring screenwriters, though, consistently create characters
that fail to stand out as unique personalities on
the page. Rather they end up as “stock” characters—facsimiles of dozens of
protagonists we’ve seen before.
How to write a script character like a novice
(example).
Imagine a character-based script about an idealistic defense lawyer, intent on reforming the
justice system. One whose life unravels due to a very bad choice he makes
regarding a client.
A writer who hasn’t properly learned how to write a script by
pushing their imagination as far as it can go might give him the following
character traits:
• Idealistic.
He wants to change the criminal justice system.
• Helpful.
He goes out of his way to help others.
• Friendly.
He gets on well with his colleagues.
• Funny. Everyone laughs at
his jokes.
• Hardworking.
He’s the last one to leave the office.
• Determined.
He’ll stop at nothing to win a case.
• Family orientated. He has a loving wife and kids.
In other words, pretty bland. We can imagine a
lawyer/protagonist like this in a spec script not being particularly
interesting because there’s nothing original or surprising
about him. There’s nothing here that will make us remember him long
after the credits roll.
Why protagonists are often boring in spec
scripts.
Aspiring writers tend to create characters like these because
they feel safe. They identify with the protagonist on a
personal level and so don’t want to make them creeps or idiots.
This also often means not letting anything bad
happen to them either as, subconsciously, this would mean letting something bad
happen to themselves.
Put these two things together—a nice, bland guy who avoids
anything bad happening to him—and inevitably you’ll wind up with a bland screenplay too.
How to write a script character like a pro
(example).
Now think back to (or watch) Dan Gilroy’s movie, Roman J. Israel Esq. In this film, we also have a protagonist,
Roman, (Denzel Washington) who’s an idealistic defense lawyer, intent on
reforming the justice system. And his life unravels thanks to a bad choice he
makes regarding a client.
But Gilroy pushes Roman’s character beyond the obvious to create a protagonist who’s truly
original and surprising. Here’s a list of character traits we can attribute to
Roman in the movie:
• Idealistic.
But this is to the point of obsession. He’s eschewed any kind of meaningful
relationship in his life in order to pursue his goal of reforming the system.
• Helpful.
Yes, he’s always lending a hand to friends and strangers. But, again, this
is to a fault. He puts others’ well-being over his own, and
this is what makes his helpfulness more interesting.
• Socially awkward. Having spent years behind the scenes at a law practice, he’s
hardly a “people person.” Subsequently, he somehow manages to rub most people
he meets up the wrong way.
• Humorless.
He’s the kind of guy who makes people laugh without realizing he’s being funny.
• Loner. His career has
always come first and so consequently he’s reached late-middle age without a
wife or kids.
• Incredible memory. He has a remarkable gift for memory that borders on genius and
is able to recite all the major law codes.
• Music lover.
He listens to music constantly while walking the streets, riding the bus, or
relaxing at home. It’s part of who he is.
• Retro. His hair is in an
afro, he owns an old-school flip phone and wears the kind of headphones usually
found on Sony Walkman’s in the 1980s. All of this adds another layer of
personality to his character.
Compare this list to the previous list of the bland lawyer’s character traits.
The second one obviously makes for a much more interesting
lawyer. Gilroy has taken the stock character of an idealistic lawyer, put a
spin on him and given us someone we’ve not seen before in a movie.
How to write a screenplay by pushing your
imagination with its characters.
Firstly, take a look at your protagonist,
antagonist, stakes character as they stand.
Are they the kind of characters you can imagine audiences
talking about years from now? Do they excite you as you write them? Are they
unpredictable and flawed? Do bad things happen to them because of their flaws?
If you can’t definitively answer yes to these questions, here
are some steps you can take to learn how to write a script so
the characters are as original as possible.
4 Key questions.
1. Get feedback on your main characters by describing them to your family,
friends and anyone who’ll listen. See if they’re interested in these characters
and keen to know what happens to them. Ask them if they feel fresh and
original, or hackneyed, and tell them to be honest.
2. Learning how to write a movie script is about giving your
characters contradictions. This is what makes
them feel three-dimensional and human. Part of what makes Roman J. Israel
interesting is the fact he’s an idealistic lawyer who does something deeply
unethical.
3. Add a character arc. In most cases (but not all) you’ll want to make sure your
protagonist has a character
arc. They should change from a flawed individual to a more rounded
one or vice versa.
4. Learn how to write dialogue between two characters by making it
a verbal battle in which only one “wins.”
How to write a screenplay:
scenes.
The same thing happens when aspiring writers fail to push their
imagination when it comes to writing scenes and sequences. Events and
situations feel familiar—like we have seen them before.
Characters feel safe and in control of events and often we’re able to predict
exactly what happens next.
How to write a script scene like a novice
(example).
Take the classic example of a “cute meet” in
which a romantic couple meets each other for the first time. And let’s say the
scenario is this:
A young man and woman meet and
fall in love while on vacation in France.
They meet somewhere
obvious, like in a bar or a cafe.
The guy pursues the
girl and maybe finds out they’re on the same flight back home.
On the plane he asks
to swap seats so he can sit next to her.
Once they return home, he calls her a few days
later and she reluctantly (but secretly happily) agrees to go on a date.
And so on…
The problem here is that there’s nothing original, surprising or
imaginative happening during these events. We’ve seen this happen before and
therefore can see what’s going to happen next.
This kind of writing is not good for a spec screenplay (and for
a writer’s career)—until, that is, they learn how to write a movie script by
pushing their imagination.
How to write a script scene like a pro
(example).
Now watch (or rewatch) the opening scenes of the drama, Take This Waltz.
The film is about a young woman named Margot (Michelle Williams)
who is happily married to Lou (Seth Rogen) but falls for an artist named Daniel
(Luke Kirby) while on vacation in France.
Take a look at the opening scenes and see how the writer, Sarah
Polley, takes the age-old concept of the cute meet and makes it something imaginative and original.
The opening sequence.
Montage of Margot at home,
cooking.
She arrives at a hotel in a
sleepy French town.
While out sightseeing by
herself, she stumbles upon a historical reenactment of an adulterer being
publicly whipped.
She’s dragged into the
spectacle and made to whip him too. A man in the crowd heckles her, which she
doesn’t appreciate.
In the airport departure
lounge, the man, Daniel, spots Margot in a wheelchair being ushered to the
front of the line.
On the plane, Daniel’s seat is
right next to Margot’s and he teases her about her wheelchair. They flirt.
Back in the US, they share a
cab home and Daniel realizes they live “pretty close.”
The cab drops them off and Margot realizes he
lives across the street.
Analysis.
Take This Waltz was
the first movie to show a couple meet in this unusual way, and that’s partly
why it made it onto the Blacklist in 2009 and
got made into a movie.
Margot doesn’t just happily run into Daniel in a cafe and have a
great time. Rather, each scene puts her under pressure in
a different way:
• She’s made to
get involved with the reenactment.
• She gets heckled
by Daniel.
• She riskily
pretends to be injured and in need of a wheelchair.
• She’s teased by
Daniel and caught off-guard by her emotions.
• She realizes he
lives across the street and ends the sequence by saying “Oh, shit…”
This is how to write a script by putting your characters under
pressure and by pushing yourself to surprise the audience every
step of the way.
How to write a screenplay by pushing your
imagination with its scenes.
Read each scene in your story with a critical eye. Is
the action exciting, moving and surprising? Would you be engaged if you saw
these scenes play out on screen as written?
Here are some ways to learn how to write a screenplay for a
movie so your scenes are as original and exciting as they can be:
1. Write out each scene in an outline or “beat sheet.” Really dig deep to come up with ways in
which they can subvert the audience’s expectations as much as possible.
2. Give the end of each scene a “button”—that is a moment that ends it with a hanging
question in the air. A moment that makes the audience wonder what’s going to
happen next.
3. Make sure your characters are pulled out of their comfort
zones. If they’re just
happily sitting around shooting the breeze much of the time, then
you may need to inject some conflict and interest into the overall concept as
well as the scenes
4. Shake up the locations and situations. If scenes are continually unfolding in
predictable places, brainstorm all the different locations that could add more
originality to them.
5. Ask yourself if the characters themselves are being
surprised by the events
occurring in each scene. If they’re not, then it’s unlikely the audience will
be either.
How to write a screenplay:
conclusion.
There is no one definitive answer to the question of how to
write a screenplay for a movie.
Beyond the usual advice to “read screenplays” “watch movies” and
“write every day” etc. every professional writer out there has got where they
are by pushing their imagination as far as it will go. How long does it Take to Write a Screenplay?
Realize also that your quest to learn how to write a script will
never “end.” Neither will your screenplay ever be technically “finished.”
What’s important is that you get it to the best possible state you can before entering it
in a screenwriting contest or showing it to a producer, exec or manager.
We can help you with this with our range of script
coverage services—all performed by a team of professional
screenwriters.
We also have a screenwriting
mentorship program in which you can be paired with one of our
team and talk with them every week about your work and the business.
Writing a movie script and letting your
imagination go.
Follow the obvious steps to writing a screenplay—hard work,
dedication, strategy, learning about theory, reading screenplays, etc.—but
don’t fall into the trap of just learning screenwriting theory and forget
the most important aspect of all: pushing your imagination.
Give us concepts, stories, characters and
scenes that are original and compelling.
This will guarantee you’ll be giving yourself the best possible
chance to succeed in this business we all love.
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