Television Script Format
Television Script Format
It's
important to remember that there is no hard and fast standardization. Each show
has its own idiosyncrasies. There are some things, however, that remain
consistent in all teleplays whether drama or sitcom. The goal here is to give
you an idea of what those are.
If
you want to write for television, you must do your homework. Learn about the
show you wish to write a spec for. Study its style, find out the common script
length, and most of all, read as many scripts as you can get your hands on.
Dissect them, try to figure out if anything is wrong with them and, if you find
something, figure out how to fix it. In other words, know the show inside and
out, be enthusiastic about it, believe in it and be a fan.
Format
and story structure are precise when it comes to episodic television. A 1/2
hour story runs about 22 minutes; an hour show, about 45 minutes with
commercials dispersed for the remaining time. The breaks must be in the right
spot for the advertisers to put up their wares. They also need to be compelling
enough to bring your viewer back to the program.
Television
is like a factory. It survives on an endless stream of product; sometimes so
similar in nature that it's hard to tell the shows apart. With the increase of
cable, the need has increased an awful lot in the last 15 years.
Network
TV is no longer king. An increasing number of channels have gone into
production with their own original programming. Examples are HBO, Showtime,
TNT, Sci Fi, and USA. This is great because it has expanded the marketplace in
which writers can circulate.
The
most important thing to remember here is that drama is conflict. Without it -
no drama. You've got to take your characters to hell before you give them a happy
ending or it won't mean anything. Conflict comes from inside the characters and
an external influence. There are three types: Man vs. Himself, Man vs. Man, Man
vs. Nature.
One-Hour
Drama
In
addition to the above, start your scenes late and get out early. They must
advance the plot and develop the character. End them on a dramatic highpoint
and make sure the conflict is well developed. Most of all, show don't tell.
Types
There
are a few different kinds.
- The procedural,
which consists of shows such as the Law and Order franchise
and the CSI franchise,
- Next are the
shows that deal with lawyers and politics. These are shows like The
West Wing, The Practice, etc.
- Police dramas,
such as, The District and NYPD Blue.
- Hero-types which
consist of shows like Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Angel,
and Smallville.
- Fantasy/Sci-Fi -
examples here are Enterprise, Twilight Zone, Dead
Zone, etc.
- Cable - Shows
such as Queer as Folk, The Sopranos, and Six
Feet Under are written without the act breaks seen in commercial
television.
Format
One-hour
shows are formatted like features, except for the act breaks. You begin and end
them as you would a sitcom, however there are no scene breaks. Each page equals
about a minute of screen time and script lengths usually fall between 53-60
pages. There are some, however, such as West Wing, which can be as long as 66
pages. Again, you must know your show. The best advice is to read the teleplays
and copy the format precisely,
The
Cover Page should indicate the name of the show, episode title, and the
writer's name.
The
Title Page should contain show name, episode title, writer's name and contact
information.
Typically,
a one-hour drama consists of a teaser and 4 acts. There are some, like
Enterprise, that have a teaser and 5 acts and still others that are only 4
acts, like Alias. Again, a good reason to study scripts for the show you wish
to write for.
Acts
are designated numerically, usually written out and centered at the top of the
page. Placing "End Act One" or "End Act 1" creates act
breaks. This is centered and double-spaced beneath the last piece of narrative
or dialogue. FADE or CUT may be used to end a scene, but it isn't necessary. A
simple scene slug line will do nicely instead. Begin each new act of a fresh
page.
The
act break is where the script reaches a strong dramatic moment. That's where
the station typically inserts commercials. The big question here is whether or
not the story moment is strong enough to break your audience back.
The
time breakdown works like this:
Teaser: |
2-4
pages |
Act One: |
14-15
pages |
Act Two: |
14-15
Pages |
Act Three: |
14-15
Pages |
Act Four: |
14-15
Pages |
Tag: |
1-2
Pages |
Total: |
59
to 66 pages |
Structure
Be
sure to follow the 3 Act Structure within your teleplay. In Act One, set up the
goal for the character. Then your character runs into an obstacle. By the end
of the act he should reach or fail to reach that immediate goal. Act One
usually lasts about 10 minutes. In Act Two, you'll complicate the character's
mission, then raise the stakes. Be sure to move your subplots forward as well
and raise the stakes again. By this point, your character is at his lowest
point. This act usually goes for about 40 minutes. By Act Three, your
character, hopefully, will have reached a new level of determination. You will
have made things even tougher for him, so he'll have to dig inside himself for
more strength. Be sure to deal with your subplots and tie up loose ends.
Finally, is the resolution or pay-off.
Depending
on the series, there can be up to three storylines running concurrently. The A
story is the main plot, while the B story is the major subplot. The C story is
called a runner or minor subplot, usually character developing. It usually
occurs three times within the hour.
Dialogue
When
writing dialogue, there are a couple of things to consider:
- The character
ages, education, and background.
- Any emotional
changes. How do they speak when emotional or angry?
- Don't use boring
and/or unnecessary dialogue.
- It must move the
story forward.
- Characters
should NEVER explain their feelings. They should be acted out.
- Be specific in
your dialogue. Details are everything and they'll serve to enrich your
characters.
- Beware of long
speeches. The thing about dialogue vs. action is that a page of action
runs a lot faster than a page of dialogue. Time expands when you talk.
Break up speeches with interjections from other characters or actions
pertaining to the scene.
- Don't let your
characters talk to themselves. If it's absolutely critical, do it
sparingly, and only if the scene turns out better with it than without it.
- ALWAYS READ
DIALOGUE OUT LOUD.
Situation
Comedies
Someone
once said that "dying is easy, comedy is hard." You really have to
understand funny in order to write funny. If a joke is told badly, no matter
how good the joke, it'll fall flat. The opposite can be true as well. If a bad
joke is well told, it could be funny.
Format
There
are two types of sitcoms: multiple camera format and single camera format.
Multiple camera format is the traditional form, and it started with shows like
"I Love Lucy," and continues with "Everybody Loves
Raymond," Will and Grace," "Frasier," etc. Single camera
shows are shot and formatted like films. Examples of these would include
"Malcolm in the Middle," The Simpsons," Curb Your
Enthusiasm," etc.
No
matter what type of show, it's important to find several actual scripts for the
spec you're writing so that you can get really familiar with the format.
Some
shows have teasers and tags, some have two acts (multiple camera format) and
some have three acts (some, but not all, single camera shows), and some have
page counts that differ from industry averages. A good example of that is Sex
and the City. This is a single camera show in three acts that includes a
key scene in every script where Carrie sits at her computer and asks the
question that frames all the stories in the episode. An analysis of past
scripts would indicate this happens about 7-11 minutes into the episode, but
not always. Know the rules before you break them.
Typical
format for multiple camera sitcoms:
- FADE IN: - All
caps and underlined
- SCENES -
numbered using CAPS. Ample space above and below and underlined.
- SLUGLINES - indicate
location, time of day, and underlined.
- Character List -
should appear directly below the slug line and indicate which characters
are needed for the scene. Also enclosed in parentheses.
- ACTIONS/DESCRIPTIONS
- listed in a capital letters
- CHARACTER INTROs
- Capitalized and underlined.
- SOUND
EFFECTS/SPEICAL EFFECTS/CAMERA INSTRUCTIONS - Capitalized and underlined.
- CHARACTER
NAMES/DIALOGUE - Capitalized and double spaced.
- PERSONAL
DIRECTION - appears within dialogue - on the same line - in all capitals
and enclosed in parentheses.
The
Cover Page should indicate the name of the show, episode title, and the
writer's name.
The
Title Page should contain show name, episode title, writer's name and contact
information.
Begin
most 1/2 hour scripts by writing the name of the show, centered and capped, 6
lines from the top of the page. Double space down from the name and center the
episode title in quotation marks. 6 lines below that, center ACT ONE, then A
below that, also centered. 8 lines below that, write FADE IN: @ the 1.4 inch
mark from the margin. A list of which characters are needed appears at the
beginning of each new scene. Every page should contain page numbers as well as the
scene letters.
You
can end each scene with a CUT TO:, DISSOLVE TO:, FADE TO:, etc., however this
is seen less frequently today.
The
second scene begins on a new page. 21 lines down, write B, centered. 6 lines
below that, write the opening slug line. All the scenes are
"numbered" with letters. The script is divided into acts and each new
act begins on a new page.
Dialogue
is double-spaced for legibility and stage direction is all in CAPS in order to
distinguish them easily from the dialogue. There should be lots of white space
for jotting down notes. Dialogue may also contain "personal
direction" for the actors within it, rather than outside it; just like a
stage play.
As
for time breakdown, the following applies:
Teaser: |
1-2
pages |
Act One: |
17-20
pages |
Act Two: |
17-20
pages |
Tag: |
1-3
pages |
Total: |
40-48
pages in length |
Typical
format for single camera sitcoms:
- Formatted like
screenplays and similar to the one hour drama.
- May or may not
have formal act breaks written on the page (this depends on whether or not
the show has commercial breaks. "Curb Your Enthusiasm,: and "Sex
and the City" are on HBO, therefore they have no commercial breaks
and read straight through. "The Simpsons," however, has three
defined acts.
- Dialogue and
stage direction are single-spaced.
- The characters
are described in ALL CAPS the first time they are introduced.
- Scripts are
generally 28-32 pages in length.
Structure
The
plots for these tend to be broad and simple. The show may have a major plot
line (A story) and a minor plot line (B story), but may not have a runner. Each
act tends to be between 3-5 scenes. The locations are fairly basic, though
outside shots are more common than they used to be. The focus isn't on action,
but on the wittiness of the repartee between the characters.
One
page of sitcom script translates into about 30 seconds of screen time. In that
time, there should be 3 to 5 solid jokes. These are jokes that are derived from
the situations that the characters find themselves in. You have to know how to
bring out the comedic nature of any situation.
Taped
sitcoms, such as Two and a Half Men, use a specific format. It's
videotaped in front of a live audience, will have a laugh track, and locations
are limited.
In
the half hour format, a scene break occurs when there is a
major change in the location, time, and sometimes, actions. Ending one scene
with a cut and beginning the next one on the following page indicates this.
Scenes are designated with the alphabet, beginning with the letter A.
A
Few Extra Words of Advice:
- Be sure to
capture the tone and character voices of the show you want to write for.
- Executives want
to read shows they know and they'll want to see if you know it, too.
- Don't write a
pilot. You have to be firmly established to pull this off. IF you do want
to write a pilot, however, write a second episode and submit that. 99.9%
of newer writers spend the first episode setting up the characters and the
setting, which leaves little room for conflict, interest, or comedy.
- Your spec script
is your calling card, so make it great. There should be no punctuation or
proofreading errors. A dropped comma or a missing question mark can change
a meaning or indicate a lack of concern for the little things. Make it
clean and professional.
- Read as many
scripts as you can. Do your research.
- Remember - 12
point, Courier Font is an ABSOLUTE RULE for ALL scripts whether feature or
television.
- Have a theme. Be
sure what your story's about and be clear on exactly what you want to say.
- Listen to people
talk. No one speaks in the same way. Listen to their choice of words; the
rhythm of their speech; the cadences and pauses are all unique.
- Make your
characters listen to each other and respond in kind. You never want them
talking at each other. They must react to what is being said. Invest
emotions and reactions in them; it will say a lot about who they are and
make them more multidimensional.
- If you must use
parentheticals (particularly in dramas), use them sparingly and only use
them to enhance the dialogue. Sometimes body language does speak louder
than the actual words. Use them to imply things the actor may use in
performance. It can also serve to change the meaning of the dialogue
entirely by saying one thing and doing something else.
- Flesh out your
characters beyond what the story actually needs. Look to the people you
know, your own background, etc., for the little things that will make them
jump off the page.
- When writing
narrative pieces, avoid inserting explanations or clarifications of things
that aren't revealed in dialogue or action. If it hasn't been given
before, there's no point to it and the forward motion of the story stops.
Keep it short and sweet; this allows the action to continue on
uninterrupted.
- Never pad your
script with dialogue and scenes that are added only to fill up space. If
nothing is happening in the scene, cut it out.
There are numerous books out there on
screenplay format and structure. Below is a list of just a few of them:
- The Complete
Book of Scriptwriting by J. Michael Straczynski
- Any book written
by Linda Seger
- Any book written
by Syd Field
- A Writer's
Journey by Christopher Vogler
- Successful
Scriptwriting by Jurgen Wolff and Kerry Cox
- The
Screenwriter's Bible by David Trottier
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